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I absolutely love how we get to finally see Orca care for Cheetah in the comic because we mostly see her get annoyed are angry with Cheetah.

As for Ketek's expression, it's good with how scared he is from Orca. It may be my eyes messing with me or I'm just tired since I just woke up, but is Orc smiling in the last panel?

Something that's been bothering me a little is how the sword has not drawn blood from any of them. I know that it'll take their soul if they're stabbed, but especially here with how Orca swipes it from Ketek, wouldn't some blood be dripping from his mouth? It is a sword and it's dangerous for you to put a sword in your mouth because it can really cut you.
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you so much for this critique!

I'm so happy you enjoyed the page :D

Oh nope, Orca is not smiling, she's snarling XD

But you're right on the sword not drawing any blood :P I should've added some of it :P I guess it's cartoon physics XD

Truly thank you so much! <3
JaydenTheThunderWolf Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I thinks it's cartoon logic, not physics lol CURSE YOU CARTOON LOGIC XD
ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FFFFF yeah! XD
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